Nieskes Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 (edited) Gave it a try, not as flashy but... one open click twice to enlarge more Edited August 11, 2009 by Nieskes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alf44 Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 thanks neiskes. ill keep that one in mind also. Heres an incentive for everyone helping me out. The ones i do use i will send a shirt and stickers when i get them made. thanks guys. :thumbsup: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dinner Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 4strokekilla; No disrespect at all, but I took your picture and smoothed out most of the outlines. Also deleted the text along the bottom, added canvas length and finished off the tires. Unless you are going to have the text outlined in white so that the edges over the tires are separated from each other , I would put the text below the Banshee instead of through it. This picture would work really well on shirts and stickers (granted they are fairly large). But as far as hats go or smaller stickers, I would forget the text in the bottom and make the website above the star a little more catchy. This is just my opinion though, don't have to use it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
4strokekilla1987 Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 With the help of dinner i think i got the final one here let me know what you think and thanks dinner my whole problem was getting those tire smoothed out. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snopczynski Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Still dont like the star behind the "T" and the text on the top is too hard to read. You have to read it several times to try and figure out what the wording is. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alf44 Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Still dont like the star behind the "T" and the text on the top is too hard to read. You have to read it several times to try and figure out what the wording is. I see what your saying snop. if the black and white were flip flopped you could see the T better.I just really want a background and the maltese cross is really overdone these days. A cool dune scene in the background would be sweet. It would proly have too be drawn though. Huh Dinner? lol. Thanks guys for all your help. Still open too other ideas and pics. And like i said before the ones I use I will give you a shirt and stickers with the logo you design. :thumbsup: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
4strokekilla1987 Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 NEW AND IMPROVED AS PER REQUEST Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dinner Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 I see what your saying snop. if the black and white were flip flopped you could see the T better.I just really want a background and the maltese cross is really overdone these days. A cool dune scene in the background would be sweet. It would proly have too be drawn though. Huh Dinner? lol. Thanks guys for all your help. Still open too other ideas and pics. And like i said before the ones I use I will give you a shirt and stickers with the logo you design. :thumbsup: What kinda of dune background? Like just a quad overlapping, sitting in the dunes. Or do you want a quad throwing some roost? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alf44 Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 What kinda of dune background? Like just a quad overlapping, sitting in the dunes. Or do you want a quad throwing some roost? roostin in the dunes. i had one idea havin a quad in a sandbox somehow. with dunes in the background. Hence alfies toybox. I just need a badass logo. you guys are awesome for helping me out. thanks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snopczynski Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 I still dont like the font on the alfiestoy box part. Its too hard to read. Look at this, this is one of my postal delivery cards at work. This is our company logo and text. See how easy it is to glance at it and you know what it is. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alf44 Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 I still dont like the font on the alfiestoy box part. Its too hard to read. Look at this, this is one of my postal delivery cards at work. This is our company logo and text. See how easy it is to glance at it and you know what it is. Man your hard too please snop! jkn. Remember that the logo im lookin for right now is for shirts stickers and hats and stuff. so black and white is easy to do for that. color works but also cost a bit more. Now if someone comes up with a badass color logo of course ill use it and mabey be able too use it for a large sighn out front. I have color business cards that are quick and too the point. ill try too post a pic. 4stroke has taken all advice and i like what hes come up with. theres only so much you can do without hand drawing it ya know. you can submit an idea also. the star is my idea. But flames, skulls, dune scene and whatever work also. I just think there should be somekind of background not just a banshee with some writing. ps. I like character and not just the same ol boring font as everyone else. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alf44 Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 heres my business card. I know its hard too see (snop) but it is easier too read the actual card and i will be doing the lettering in black proly next time. the actual card is alot more ledgable. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snopczynski Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Our logo is used on T-shirts in black and white also. The key is to make it so someone can read it and remembers it. If you spend half the time your looking at it trying to make out what it says, then that does you no good. It may look cool, but no one will know what the hell it is. I did not show our logo because of the color, I showed it because of how easy it was to read the company logo. It makes no difference to me what you end up with, I was just sayin its hard as fuck to read. Imagine it on a T-shirt where the shirt may not sit flat, it would be even harder to make it out. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alf44 Posted August 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 Right on dude. We just have different taste thats all. Personally I think your logo is too cluttered. Im not going to sit there and read the whole thing if its on a shirt. Im not one too critisize but if thats the way you are thats cool. Thanks for your opinion though. NEXT! :smile: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snopczynski Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 The logo is just the shield with NW Safe Co. The rest of that is the delivery card that we give to customers to dell them on us delivering their safe. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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